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第10章 分“照猫画虎”——控制性写作(10)

Yours sincerely,

Model Passage 10

Sept.8, 2006Sunday Fine

Today we visited the Forest Farm and enjoyed ourselves very much.

Early in the morning we met at the school gate and set off at about 8 o’clock.An hour or so later we got to the farm.We were warmly welcomed by the farmers at the gate.The head of the farm showed us around the farm himself and told us about the great changes on the farm.At noon, we had a picnic on the grassland.Then some of us sang and danced, some told stories and others enjoyed the beautiful scenery of the farm.At sunset, we said goodbye to the farmers and left the farm.

Today, we not only had a good time but also learned a lot from the farmers.

Presentation

1.Read the passage carefully.仔细阅读范文。

2.Pay attention to the form of a diary, date and weather at the beginning, then write what happens.

日记写作形式:日期——天气——内容。

3.Write a similar diary about a visit to a factory, a school or a company.

写一篇关于参观访问某工厂、学校或公司的日记。

4.Some information for writing a diary about a visit to Xiangshan Gouqi Processing Factory.

下表是关于在香山枸杞加工厂的访问活动,请根据此信息写一则日记。

Date Saturday, September 5.

Place Xiangshan Gouqi Processing Factory

Departure time 8:00

Arrival time 8:30

Things happened Morning: workers welcomed us, manager showed us around and told…,worked in the workshops Noon: had lunch with the workers, After lunch: had a gather——together with the workers

Time to return 4:00

Writing Activity 写作活动

Sept.5 SaturdayFine

Today, we paid a visit to and had a .

In the morning after breakfast, we and set .later, we .We were warmly

.The manager

.Then we

At noon,.After lunch We sang and .At 4:00, .

Today, we

.

Model Passage 11

A Page from Chen Ping’s Diary

Thursday, August 20, 2006 Sunny

This afternoon our class had a PE lesson.Our PE teacher took us to practise high jump.

When the bell rang, we gathered on the sports ground.After the warming up exercises, the teacher told us the way of high jump and gave us an example.Then we students followed the teacher and practised jumping one after another.Soon it was my turn and I felt nervous.I failed the first time but I wasn’t discouraged.I kept on thinking the teacher’s instruction and practicing.At last I managed to jump over 1.2 meters.

From this class I came to realize that one will succeed if he has perseverance (a strong will).

Presentation

1.Read the diary carefully and remember it.熟读范文。

2.Pay attention to the way of writing a diary→day, date, weather, what to write.

注意日记的写作格式:星期、日期、天气、内容。

3.Write a similar diary according to the table.

根据下面的要求写一篇与范文类似的日记。

Title(标题):A Page from Wan Xiaoping’s Diary

Date: August 22, 2006

Day: Friday

Weather: sunny

What to write: long jump

Tense: Simple Past tense

Writing Activity 写作活动

(Complete the sentences)

A Page from Wan Xiaoping’s Diary

This ,we had a PE lesson.Our teacher led us to.

When the bell rang,.After , the teacher

Then we .Soon came and I felt .I failedbut I didn’t, I kept

.At last I.

From

Model Passage 12

Asking for leave

Dear Mr Zhao,

I am writing to you to ask for a sick leave.

Last Saturday, I went out for a bike riding with my father and we were caught in a snow——fall on our way back home.That night I had a headache.My mother took my temperature and found that I had a high fever.She took me to see the doctor the next morning.The doctor said I had a bad cold and asked me to stay in bed for three days.So I am sorry to say I can’t come to school today and I can’t take part in the basketball match to be held on Tuesday afternoon.The doctor’s certificate is also included.

Presentation

1.Read the model passage carefully.仔细阅读范文。

2.When writing a asking——for——leave, you should clearly write about your reason, time and even the doctor’s certificate if you ask for a sick leave.

分析:写请假条时,要清楚地交待请假的原因和时间。如果请病假,还要附上医生证明。

3.Write a similar asking——for——leave following the information below.仿照范文的结构、时态和段落,根据下面所给词汇的顺序写一个请假条。

Helped father on the farm ——drank cold water ——kept omitting————ate nothing——see the doctor—— stomachache ……

Writing activity 写作活动

Dear ,

I’m .

Yesterday morning, I helped

and I drank a lot of .That

afternoon,

Model Passage 13

Leaving a message

Sept.22nd

Dear Mr Zhang,

You happened to be out when we called on you this morning.We’ve got something to tell you.Zhang Lihua, your old student, has come back from Shanghai and will soon return there to work.She will stay here for another week.We’d like to have a party with some of our old classmates in Hongbao Restaurant at 12:00 this Saturday.We would like to invite you, too.Would you be kind enough to come over and meet us?

Huang Lei and Li Ning

Presentation

1.Read the model passage carefully.仔细阅读范文。

2.When writing a message, you have to write clearly about what to do, time and place.

分析:写便条要清楚地交代事由、时间和地点

3.Write a similar message following the information below.仿照范文,用下面的提示写一留言

What to do: Have a football game with the team from Zhongning No.3 High School

Time: Saturday afternoon

Place: on the football field of Zhongning No.1 High School

Writing activity 写作活动

Sept.22nd

Dear ,

It happened that you when I came to your .I’ve got .We have planned

Wang Xiaoping

Model Passage 14

Resume

Name: Wang Jianping

Sex: Male

Address: No.2——241 Zhongshan Road, Yinchuan.

Date of Birth: November 21, 1980

Place of Birt: Yinchuan,Ningxia,PRC

Nationality: Chinese

Marital Status: Married

Health: Excellent

Interests: Drawing,piano

Mobile: 13817265186

Education:

1987.9——1993.7 Yinchuan No.21 Primary School

1993.9——1999.7 Yinchuan No.1 Middle School

1999.9——2003.7 Ningxia University(Math Department)

Work Experience:

Teaching at Yinchuan No.2 Middle School

Skills:

Skillful in computer operation

Good at playing basketball

Presentation

1.Read the model resume carefully.仔细阅读范文。

2.Note how to write a resume.注意写履历的格式。

3.A resumeshould include:

I.Personal Data.

Name/Sex/Date of Birth/Place of Birth

Nationality/Marital Status

Health/Interests/Telephone

II.Education

III.Work Experience

IV.Skills

4.Write your own resume or a similar one according to the given information below,using the method of the above resume.

用范文的方法,写一份自己的履历,或根据下面表格中的信息完成一份履历。

姓名李振华男出生 日期1988.10.11出生地宁夏,中宁

家庭住址中宁县裕民路709号

健康状况健康兴趣爱好音乐

学 历1994.9——2000.7。中宁县宁安一小2000.9——2003.7。中宁县第四中学 2003.9——2006.7。中宁中学。

技能擅长英语口语,能熟练操作电脑

Writing activity 写作活动

I.Personral Data

II.education

III.Skills

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